I am using (SEE THIS) to email quotes to potential customers. They have a comment section to address the customer. Of course I mention other details but I was wondering about attaching this to every quote.

"Thank you for letting me price you out. Refilled cartridges work just as good as the overpriced product you are using now. There are still a lot of people/company’s refilling them the incorrect way, so beware when you chose your refiller. If you decide to use us you have made a good choice.

Justin"

How does that look to you everyone? Is the wording alright? Should I add anything else. I want to keep it short as possible but I'm not the best at wording.

There's more to my process of emailing them the quote. I obv call and let them know I have a quote worked up and will be emailing it to them. So they don't confuse it as spam and delete it. I will also be following up a week or two later.

Thoughts!!